It's a tough crowd here, Danny.

I can certainly see/hear potential and the sound is moving in the right direction from when you first started but, sorry to say, I tend to agree with most here.
Musically I can like the song well enough and it's always good to hear a guitar solo........but vocally, and also from a simple 'song' viewpoint, it's not quite there yet. The vocals are very dry and would benefit from some effects perhaps.

Keep slugging away and I think, if the band stays together, you'll end up with the finished article but it's not quite there at the moment. Like I said, it's going in the right direction.

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